wasted opportunity don;t we all have those.Great poem
Fascinating comparative piece with subtle layers of meaning.http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/05/09/i-am-lost/
I like apathy disguised as rain. Creative.
Wonderful imagery - executed perfectly.
It is so good to have you back at TWW - your words are distinctively beautiful..apathy falling..when you think by nature it doesn't even move..but how it can drown you..quietly..Jae
"striking the leaveson the tree of good hope,making them tremble"I love the imagery, Jerry! So nice to see you outside of PA smiles to you!
Thanks, Hannah. I get out of the neighborhood every once in a while.